>Dream Not…..For Jingle Poetry

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Dream Not
I dream of reality,
a R.E.M.embrance
of when I am
presently awake.
Not moving my
eyes in front of you,
but heavy lids
propped up
by your story.
Your joy and pain
sleepy rain
running down
my cheeks.
My reality becomes
a dream with you of
moments of
wide
awake.

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8 responses to “>Dream Not…..For Jingle Poetry”

  1. fiveloaf Avatar
    fiveloaf

    >lovely! here's mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/

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  2. TALON Avatar
    TALON

    >I love how dreams and reality blended, Jerry…the last lines are like a testament to true love.My potluck: so maybe

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  3. Jingle Avatar
    Jingle

    >what a cute surprise…Thanks for sharing your talent with JP..A+

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  4. booguloo Avatar
    booguloo

    >You've caught that connection between story teller and listener for me.

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  5. Reflections Avatar
    Reflections

    >Blending moments, be they dreams or reveries… fun surprises still await.

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  6. Jingle Poetry Avatar
    Jingle Poetry

    >wise words, well put.keep it up.:)

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  7. DeLi Avatar
    DeLi

    >i think i am always in the dreamland….that joy and pain moment then reality…and isnt it so sweet to have that dream gives us a lot of possibility to hope and go on?

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  8. Jingle Avatar
    Jingle

    >you truly impressed me ..sleepy rain …love the imagery here.masterful poetry, elegant sentiments…keep the brilliance coming… Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!

    Reply

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