Day Broke Me Open

They passed by.

The waves of storms rolled toward sunrise.

To the west a rainbow was pierced

with a serrated knife of electricity.

To the east tufts of clouds

like pale pink umbrellas hung.

 

Intervals of solid rain tucked me

under the soffit to read.

Ann wrote about the pursuit of beauty

and there I was under it, in it.

 

Praise had come as rain.

Praise left my mouth.

Praise was sent to find the source of beauty.

 

My most significant Other read to me poetry.

I heard His inflections and cadence.

Oh my God, I am undone,

yet what better place to be unraveled

than under an umbrella with You.

 

“Doubt the philosophies, doubt the prophecies, doubt the Pharisees (especially the ones seen in mirrors), but Who can doubt this, Beauty? Beauty requires no justification, no explanation; it simply is and transcends. See beauty and we know it  in the marrow, even if we have no words for it: Someone is behind it, in it. Beauty Himself completes.” Ann Voskamp, One Thousand Gifts


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16 responses to “Day Broke Me Open”

  1. camerashoot365 Avatar

    Did you write this about the sky this morning? I got a picture of the rainbow. The sky was awesome!

    1. Jerry Avatar

      Why, indeed I did

  2. claudia Avatar

    oh nice..yep..what better place… wouldn’t mind to spend some time with him under an umbrella.. great picture you paint..literally…my fav are the tufts of clouds like pale pink umbrellas …and how the pouring of rain leads to a pouring of praise..

  3. brian miller Avatar

    To the west a rainbow was pierced

    with a serrated knife of electricity
    love that imagery man…and it just kept coming from there….your most significant Other reading you poetry…smiles….very nice jerry…

  4. Daydreamertoo Avatar

    Nothing quite as lovely as watching a storm, in the distance. The power, the pure energy of them can be quite beautiful as long as they don’t cause flooding or damage. You’ve captured the beauty of mother nature at her finest in this, fluffy clouds, a rainbow, lightening, rain. All painted in such gentle tones yet, vivid detail.
    A lovely read and, thanks for the visit.

  5. Laurie Kolp Avatar
    Laurie Kolp

    Nice… I especially like the first stanza.

  6. Louise Avatar

    Oh, really beautiful…love “To the east tufts of clouds

    like pale pink umbrellas hung” ~ gorgeous line 🙂

  7. charlesmashburn Avatar

    Beautiful poem, Jerry! I love it!

  8. Mama Zen Avatar

    Gorgeous imagery!

  9. Susan Avatar

    “Intervals of solid rain tucked me
    under the soffit to read.
    Ann wrote about the pursuit of beauty
    and there I was under it, in it.”

    And because of the strong images, I am there with you even before you begin returning the praise and unraveling!

  10. hedgewitch Avatar
    hedgewitch

    This is very vivid Jerry, especially against this white layout–haven’t read you in awhile either, and it’s a pleasure to see your words again–the sky is something that connects us to so much more than earth–I can feel that here. Love the pink umbrellas.

  11. Susan L Daniels Avatar

    Jerry–this is so gorgeous–the serrated knife of electricity, all of it.

  12. Sheila Avatar

    yet what better place to be unraveled

    than under an umbrella with You.
    ….

    what better place, indeed. Lovely poetry, just lovely!

  13. Bodhirose Avatar

    Very romantic and emotional…the beautiful sky and being read to…under an umbrella with your most significant other…ahhhh!

  14. John (@bookdreamer) Avatar

    Strange could not find this last night via the link but did via your comments on dVerse. Worth the search. Good writing

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