It is another Monday.

Most of the out-of-towners

have gone back to their life.

 

My son and I watched

a blood orange sun

disappear beyond the edge

of the earth.

Near the end

it appeared bigger

and sunk faster.

 

It was like the death

of my mother.

At the end we stared.

We counted her

freckles and wrinkles

and the rise and fall of her chest.

 

At the time it seemed like eternity,

but now the memory is a short journal entry.

It is like taking out a granite tablet

and jotting down her life in a sentence.

 

The beauty was fleeting

and we wanted to touch it.

There was once a big moon

as big as a get-well balloon.

There was a big sun

as big as a farewell.

 

© Gerald Allen Barrett and parentheticallyspeakingin3d, 2012.


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7 responses to “Monday Mourning, After the Sun Went Down.”

    1. Ellen Avatar
      Ellen

      You put our feelings in all your words … I love you!

  1. Jerry Avatar

    Reblogged this on G. Allen Barrett Poet. Writer. and commented:

    It’s been three years and you are missed. Love you Mom.

  2. Wanda Avatar
    Wanda

    AW, Jerry, how precious. Love your poem. Your mom must have been a wonderful person.

  3. Jerry Avatar

    Thanks Wanda…she is missed.

  4. Ann Kilter Avatar

    What a great tribute, and poetic expression of that period compressed into a moment by the passage of time

    1. Jerry Avatar

      Thanks Ann. I hope all is well with you. Have a great weekend!

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