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a hand out to
dance hip-hop
in a German pub
with old men at their
stations leaning
into a very dark beer
and smoke started
its movement  with ours
I flipped a guy’s hat off
while bumping my
frualine into a chair
we flipped the air
and all the old men
did was stare
This week on my word of the day e-mails was German words …here’s another.
Stop by Mr. Knowitalls blog and try a 55. 

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6 responses to “>Schwarmerei”

  1. Brian Miller Avatar

    >flipped the air…nice…i like the feel of the scene…and let them stare…smiles.

  2. dustus Avatar

    >This is a creation inspired from a word of the day email? Very cool. You create a vivid scene in 55 based on an unlikely prompt!

  3. G-Man Avatar

    >Acht du Lieber!!!Loved your 55 Jerry.It puts us in the proper weltenschaang!Thanks for playing today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

  4. Jingle Avatar

    >wow.dancing words.well constructed.

  5. Eric 'Bubba' Alder Avatar

    >You had me at "dark beer" Jerry! Wünderbar!

  6. Claudia Avatar

    >nice – now Schwärmerei means when someone thinks that someone else is absolutely nice and is a little bit in love – but only a little bit…

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