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no retirement
traded in the light saber
the force suspended
Submitted for One Shoot Sunday. Photo by JackAZ photography.
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11 responses to “>High Coup Bow”
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>Short, succinct, sweet. Nice one, Jerry
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>haiku-ul…this prompt is unlike many others…not just a flower, or a wall of bricks, or…an iconic image with much room for "playing around"mornin' JPeace, hpI have one
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>After a lifetime spent in intergalactic warfare, one would think he'd at least have a pension. When Vader hocks his sabre, the economy must terrible. Force suspended, indeed.
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>now you see where the heros of the galaxies end up…lolcool take on the prompt jerry
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>That was perfect for the photo prompt, Jerry!
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>Stunning, one of my favorite poems in this batch of Vader poems. Utterly perfect (overkill expression, yes, but true) – wish I'd written this (said in a non-jealous way).
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>Agree with Steve Isaak—One of my favorites in this batch. More and more I am liking short, punchy stuff, but when, as here, the final touch is supplied by the reader's pondering, then most excellent.The tone is quippy, but there's a dark edge.
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>So sad, so true,so good.
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>Hopefully the force will return whe he hits those tremolos. So much said here Jerry!
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>cool.
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>Great wrap-up of his life!
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