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>Poignant commentary that is rich in imagery and references to history and myth. Excellent work, Jerry.
>fabulous social commentary…mixed in wiht a bit of history and that refrain through out…poignant indeed.
>Oil seems to be the life blood of greed.I loved that refrain…it added such a wonderful element to this piece.I loved this poem, Jerry.
>I can see why you are a part of Glynn's Faith, Friends and Fiction. You are a poet, I see. I saw your comment over at Glynn's a couple weeks ago and wanted to say hello!
>An excellent statement in poetic verse of man's incessant greed
>I think this is my favorite so far. I've read more than a little about Egypt and this one captures the depth of history and social nuance behind the current situation and its consequences.
>We have come to the point Jerry where there is no past or future only the oil floating buy. Nothing else matters, just that damn oil.
>Hi Jerryits so apt and interesting… 'And oil keeps floating by.'I enjoyed it very much…ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah Shivayahttp://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html
>Good use of song-ish repetition. Effective.
>wow – now you're going into political themes with your writing…very well done jerry…
>fabulous depiction of society with a wonderful ref to history. an interesting write.
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