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>Beautiful, imaginative poem that speaks to the heart about what is most important in life. Excellent work, Jerry.
>I think you need you need those silhouettes because they are already in your heart. Good poem, Jerry.
>i like this a lot jerry – many beautiful lines likeholding melancholy up with candy canes and shadows rolling out like cookie dough… and hope it's getting calmer now and you can spend more time with your fam…and thanks for coming back on my "lost coins" – think you were spot on with what you wrote..
>smiles…this has a really warm feel to it…and i hope you get your request of the golden orb…
>I thought Elton sang, "Don't let your SON go.." (Oops!)Nice One Shot, Jerry!
>I liked this. There are times when you want to freeze-frame life…so you can get back to it when you have the proper time. You captured that essence perfectly, Jerry.
>yes jerry they grow up too quicklycan I borrow your cookie cutter pleaseHave a Happy New Year with that wonderful brood of yoursMoon smiles
>It all over now Jerry….enjoy those children they are gone to soon…and Christmas keeps coming even after they move out….bkm
>Good imagery wedged into the lines. Solid piece.
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