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Who told you to do that?
That thing you do with your lip,
when you tuck it under your teeth?
Or that occasional bounce in your step like
walking on inverted slinkies?
Or that way you wipe off the phone
on your thigh after saying goodbye?
Who told you to flash a dimple with that smile?
Or the way you sand down your voice
so it’s as smooth and light like balsa wood?
Who told your eyes how to tap
dance when we make contact?
Who told you to say what you feel with
grace and depth like the trinity
of brush, oil, and canvass?
Who told you to love my often
independent self?
Who told?

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10 responses to “>Who Told? … for One Shot Wednesday”

  1. Glynn Avatar

    >A love poem, Jerry, and it comes through loud and clear. 🙂

  2. kaykuala Avatar

    >It creates an impression of wanting to be together with that someone. Great!

  3. TALON Avatar

    >I can't help thinking the answer is "her heart".Lovely!

  4. Brian Miller Avatar

    >i dunno…but it sure feels like love…

  5. Claudia Avatar

    >oh jerry – this is beautiful…you truly see her with the eyes of a loving man

  6. Eric Alder Avatar

    >I didn't say nothing to nobody!(They musta figgered it out for themselves!)Nice One Shot, Jerry!

  7. S Avatar

    >WOw thats awesome you big romantic!

  8. Pete Marshall Avatar

    >i really enjoyed that…there were so many wonderful lines..cheers pete

  9. moondustwriter Avatar

    >jerry – it's great cuz it's those quirky things we love isn't it???i bet your wife loves your quirkinessThanks for the One ShotMoonie smiles

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