I am under whelmed by the simplicity of it.
I am under whelmed by the simplicity of it.
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>and perhaps overwelmed by the result of it…until we let it go it is only ours to hold…nice one shot.
>you always have the most amazing thoughts and ideas..i love your beach ball one shot jerry
>An over-whelming (or under-whelming?) One Shot, Jerry!
>Simple and beautiful verse… I like the way you have created sand ball into an elegant show… of grace.thanks for sharing… a good idea too.ॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivaya Twitter: @VerseEveryDay Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
>that was very profound….lovely poem..thanks for sharing pete
>This was a unique perspective. The under-whelming sort of leaves me melancholy…makes me think of that song by Peggy Lee, "Is That All There Is?"
>I thought I had posted a comment but I must have lost it somewhere. I think we all construct that ball of wet sand, and then we find it slipping through our fingers, and becoming an unformed pile on the ground.Really like this, Jerry.
>Most excellent poem My friend…Great One Shot….G
>To me, the poem is a peaceful reminder of how much of value I can do apart from the Lord: Nothing. Simply nothing.
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