>We and Us for Friday Flash 55

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Step down
on your way
look around
make a stay
power loss
come here
try a toss
sincere
you are
I am
far
gone
to play
a ring
a kiss
an
over nite
gray grey grae
I will step up
for you
on my way
I can pray
you and me
become us and we.

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9 responses to “>We and Us for Friday Flash 55”

  1. G-Man Avatar
    G-Man

    >Jerry…I really liked the style of your contribution.Excellent 55, and very Romantic!I hope you found this to be creative, challenging, and FUN!Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  2. Brian Miller Avatar
    Brian Miller

    >becoming we and us….that is a very good prize at the bottom of the cereal box…love your early rhyme scheme…some good off beats.

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  3. Jerry Avatar
    Jerry

    >Woke up in the night and thought of a change up for the end of this 55. (Brian)G-Man…are you from Michigan originally? KAWE

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  4. TALON Avatar
    TALON

    >I like the evolution in this poem. A really neat 55!

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  5. Mama Zen Avatar
    Mama Zen

    >Lovely!

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  6. Claudia Avatar
    Claudia

    >..become us and we..nice one!

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  7. Eric Alder Avatar
    Eric Alder

    >I liked the "gray grey grae" triad and the ending:"I can prayyou and me become us and we"Nice 55!

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  8. Prayer Girl Avatar
    Prayer Girl

    >I think this is my first time here to your blog. Very nice 55. I too love the "you and me become us and we". Beautiful.Mine is up.PG

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  9. Jingle Avatar
    Jingle

    >uplifting and fun 55.cool reading!

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