>Heal

I see another’s feelings.
To put words to their pain
gives them a voice and
a place to set their tears.
It would be a place
between our loves.
A place to look until
the mist of our eyes lifts
and we can see each other.


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4 responses to “>Healing for One Word at a Time …blog carnival”

  1. Shashi Avatar

    >Beautiful.. I loved the last two lines… as the mist of our eyes lifts…Its lovely.ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  2. dustus Avatar

    >I second Shashi… beautiful poem with a wonderful ending. Nice One Shot!

  3. Claudia Avatar

    >yes – sometimes there is a mist that has to lift first before we can see each other..beautifully expressed

  4. Duane Scott Avatar

    >A place to look until the mist of our eyes lifts… and we can see each other. I loved this post. Beautiful!

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