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Submitted for One Stop Poetry. A Saturday celebration: Your Past.
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Submitted for One Stop Poetry. A Saturday celebration: Your Past.
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>smiles. i think it is a lovely write jerry…i imagine marriage which is already like learning another language could be quite difficult mixing verious cultures…
>I love how you say you were 'getting to know her' on your 11th anniversary. You are are a wise man, Jerry, and this is a poem that struggles at times but does make it–rhymed quatrains often feel forced, but you've made several of them extremely potent in this. I like '..The frayed twigs have curled in to ask/โHave I summoned my own love to task?โ' Your wife's strength (and your love for her) shines through this.
>Your wife is truly blessed to have such an amazing soul as you as her partner, Jerry. (which tells me she, too, is an amazing soul)
>What a lovely tribute! Simply beautiful! ๐
>this is flooded with love for your wife..beautiful
>This is so beautiful and I'm glad to hear you have it hanging in your bedroom. =) A morning prayer, a sight of love to tug in heart as soon as you open eyes. =)Cheers!
Thanks for your time and thoughts.