>Bad Ire Day…for FFF….join the crew today! It’s a hoot.

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Jerry

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Don’t take that poetic tone with me!
Put that metaphor down and back away slowly.
A little less alliteration, leave letters lie.
About those similes, they are like, like, like…identical twins.
Don’t talk to me in meters and rhyme,
I’m not in the mood, out of time.
Give it straight,
because I have a headache.

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11 responses to “>Bad Ire Day…for FFF….join the crew today! It’s a hoot.”

  1. izzy Avatar
    izzy

    >No indecision there! very clear-'leave the letters lie' is great, thanks!

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  2. Eric 'Bubba' Alder Avatar
    Eric ‘Bubba’ Alder

    >One of the most clever 55's I've ever read!Nice job, Jerry!

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  3. Brian Miller Avatar
    Brian Miller

    >haha this is briliant…i can see being held up with a metaphor…lol

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  4. Claudia Avatar
    Claudia

    >jerry…i LOVE your 55 – you rock the place – ha!

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  5. SY Avatar
    SY

    >this is fantastic loved it..truly unique- SY

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  6. Belinda Munoz Avatar
    Belinda Munoz

    >LOVE this! Very clever!

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  7. hedgewitch Avatar
    hedgewitch

    >It does get old some days, doesn't it?

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  8. G-Man Avatar
    G-Man

    >You sound like an angry college professor!!But it was Most Excellent!!Loved your 55 My Friend.Thanks for playing, thanks for your support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End….G

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  9. kenny Avatar
    kenny

    >Gorgeous! A little less alliteration! ha!

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  10. tattytiara Avatar
    tattytiara

    >Oh clever – that was fun.

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  11. Raven Avatar
    Raven

    >How very bright and witty…(aka clever) Enjoyed it immensely.

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