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Sea, what you say,
come with me,
let’s go play              again.
I’m under your tow,
come on please
let me go                  again.
Oh, tip up your tide
let’s take a quick ride          again.
Break on my turf,
take me out,
let me surf               again.
Sea what you wave,
curl ‘round me
tube like a cave       again.

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16 responses to “>Surf’s Up…For Friday Flash 55”

  1. Brian Miller Avatar

    >kowabunga dude…again. smiles. a little more than surfing in thsi 55?

  2. lime Avatar

    >terrific rhythm that lends nicely. surf's up!

  3. Alice Audrey Avatar

    >You had me right up to shave. Then suddenly my mind went to commercial.

  4. Belinda Munoz Avatar

    >I see a barrel surf! Fun rhythmic 55.

  5. joanny Avatar

    >Found my self floating and bobbing up and down with the lyrical rhythm.of this verse.nice 55er,joanny

  6. A Daft Scots Lass Avatar

    >I love the powerful format and the simplicity of the words.

  7. Austin Avatar

    >Made me wish for the summer and I love the winter! Nice write.Spiderman's Ride is my 55 this week.

  8. TALON Avatar

    >I loved the use of "again" – it just put me right at the sea. Lovely!

  9. Eric Alder Avatar

    >(I hear Teletubbies chanting: "Again! Again!")Nice 'flow' to this 55, Jerry.

  10. Claudia Avatar

    >unfortunately i can't surf the sea – only the internet…

  11. PattiKen Avatar

    >Surf's up! I heard the Beach boys singing in the background. Nice one.

  12. Lulda Casadaga Avatar

    >I've never surfed, but love the ocean. In fact, I will be spending my thanksgiving at the beach! Hang 10 or should i say 55!!

  13. moondustwriter Avatar

    >great rhythm with the surf – makes me want to get the board out nice 55Happy Weekend – stay dry

  14. Mona Avatar

    >You make surfing sound like a sensuous experience 🙂

  15. Dianne Avatar

    >Hey this almost sounds like song lyrics, roll me rock me all night long, etc. fun 55. I think if you'll take advice, change your blog information section to read "gardening" instead of "yardwork" Hahaha.have a good weekend.my 55 is up for all my poet friends, HEREDianne

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